Sunday, February 22, 2009

Watermelon by Jouan


Listen to Jouan as she shares about her eating a piece of watermelon. We will be doing lots of recounts and recreative writing this term.

7 comments:

M Webb said...

Jouan
I liked the way that you spoke about watermelon. It does smell a bit like perfume, and I dont like eating the seeds in it! I will show this to my classroom tomorrow well done with your video.
Mr Webb and Room Eight, Melville Intermediate, Hamilton, Waikato.

Anonymous said...

I think you sholde do some more but i like it keep up the good work from wyatt

Anonymous said...

Wow Jouan,watermelon pefume.Really intretsing and tomatos that look like watermelon!Your story was really awesome.

Anonymous said...

So amazing i love that storie.What a storie good luck for next years blogging

Anonymous said...

That was very good because you said what the seeds that were in the watermelon. From Esrah.

Anonymous said...

Hi mubasshira Thank you for leaving a comment. I really liked the message that you gave me. Thank you so much Jouan.

Anonymous said...

Hey Jouan

WOW!!!

what a great story I really liked it.
What was your favourite bit of eating this watermelon?

Thanks
From Mubasshira